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Struggle of a Butterfly

Cocooned in safe world so fragile, The butterfly flutters by, Nothing in life comes too facile, Struggle you must, break in to fly, Kites of success shall sail on high ! Written on 26/5/14 Sponsor- Kelly deschler Contest- The butterfly flutters by

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/1/2014 3:59:00 PM

wow. nice nice :) God bless always.. :)

Darren Watson

Date: 5/27/2014 6:50:00 AM

A lovely little poem . I wish you luck in the contest .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2014 9:26:00 PM

a nice little quintain. I worked on my butterfuly poem today too. Good luck in the contest.

Deb Wilson

Date: 5/26/2014 4:53:00 PM

Very beautifully written ! love, Deb

Joseph May

Date: 5/26/2014 2:53:00 PM

Wonderful quintain Dr Upma...Charlie Sheen is an actor and starred in a show called two and a half men...

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/26/2014 12:00:00 PM

Upma, you put it very well- fragility of life and need to struggle to succeed. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/26/2014 1:55:00 PM

Thnx Mohan !