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Stroll Slowly

Stroll slowly along the beach with me Together under the brilliant stars Come listen to my heart songs I'll love you just the way you are Be my one and only The answer to my prayers Come and walk beside me The rest of our living years I'll gaze lovingly into those caramel eyes Stroke lightly on your lambent cheek Whisper sweet poetry in your attentive ear My heart will tremble as we speak Wrap your arms securely around me Make me feel safe and warm Comfort me with hugs and kisses Together we'll weather the storms

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Date: 6/7/2015 9:29:00 AM
There IS a romantic side behind the limmericks! Very lovely piece.
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Date: 6/6/2015 1:56:00 AM
Ah, what everyone is looking for Tim. Beautifully written---kind regards----John
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Date: 6/4/2015 10:09:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 6/1/2015 10:55:00 PM
So nice to have someone hold your hand no matter what. SKAT
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Date: 6/1/2015 2:10:00 PM
Tim, so beautifully penned and full of love and romance and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou
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Date: 6/1/2015 8:32:00 AM
As romantic as ever...secure in love's embrace, whatever the storm might bring. // paul
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Date: 6/1/2015 4:05:00 AM
it valentine's in in june, tim... how tenderly, lovingly written.. swooning!.. huggs
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:19:00 AM
What a beautiful poem.How wonderful it is to stroll along this beach of security and love.Just amazing.lExtrelmely Romantic.Love the pic. too. A favourite..Charma
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Date: 5/31/2015 11:22:00 PM
So beautiful and sweet! It's my great pleasure to read it today (1 day holiday here) my very dear friend, Tim. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for stopping by and your wonderful comment on my poem! Have a great day! Blessings to you! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/31/2015 11:25:00 PM
Thanks Leonora have a nice holiday .....Tim
Date: 5/31/2015 9:44:00 PM
You have the magic touch, lets hope the blackhawks do too!!!!!
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Date: 5/31/2015 10:33:00 PM
: ) ...can not wait...Wednesday night
Date: 5/31/2015 6:47:00 PM
Lovely tribute to your muse. A beautiful love song for her ears. Great write, Tim. This is Eileen, BTW....
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/31/2015 6:53:00 PM
Yes I us saw on a blog you had changed your name....thanks Eileen

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