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Striving For Love

The sun shines on a broken heart Love struggling not to fade into the dark The heart thumps trying to change its fate For the love of the soul to be overcome by hate The heart strives for the same goal Struggling to be loved by the same girl The body forcing new physical output Thinking she'll fall in love with a more muscular look Soon the heart will again try love Forcing the body to talk to that sweet lady It strives and struggles for love But still the girl acts so shady

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/19/2012 8:42:00 AM
Hey William, this is a lovely poem. Love the second verse -oh the things we do for love! Too bad some people don't appreciate it!
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William Hughes
Date: 7/20/2012 4:18:00 PM
That's exactly how i feel. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Book: Shattered Sighs