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I cannot feel your hurt, yet, I know it exists. For deep within your heart, an emptiness persists. I cannot share your loss; grief's a personal pain. And it teeters on the brink of sane and insane. I cannot dry your tears or take your pain away. And depression will come; although it will not stay. I cannot lie and say things will be as before. For you still can't accept that you'll see him no more. I can only say that death's a natural course. And to lean on your faith, for God's love is its source. I offer you solace when reality's stark. And a friend with a match to strike against the dark. (Quatrain) 5/28/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:33:00 AM
What a beautiful consoling talk with a grieving widow(er). Most understanding offer of friendship, support and more. Very well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 5/29/2015 6:57:00 AM
I find this to be a brilliantly written poem. One that inspires, sends a clear message and flows like a clear mountain stream. A7 and deserves a ten....
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Date: 5/29/2015 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Robert, once more I am indebted to you for your support. Emile.
Date: 5/28/2015 1:51:00 PM
very cool poem
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Date: 5/28/2015 1:23:00 PM
beautiful write.well done x
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Date: 5/29/2015 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, I am indebted to you for your support. Emile.
Date: 5/28/2015 9:30:00 AM
An inspirational write from you my dear friend, Emile! Thank you so much for your wondrous offering through this excellent verse! Your friendship and talents are so precious gifts to me. More power and blessings! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:13:00 AM
Leonora, your kind words have touched my heart, thank you. Emile.
Date: 5/28/2015 9:13:00 AM
I love everything about this poem. From the meaning of it, to the lovely poetic flow. Verses 3 and 6 are my favorites!
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Anna, you remain steadfast in your support, I enjoy your generous comments of support. Emile.
Date: 5/28/2015 8:47:00 AM
Emile, I envy you, not only because you don't pretend to know the hurt or griefs of some one going through so much... i admire the friendship you offer.Sometimes a friendly match will light forever.... hugs
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:17:00 AM
Thank you SKAT, once more I am indebted to you for your unwavering support. Emile.

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