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Stretch of a Moment

Morning draws the air's curtain open wandering around viscous spaces like an August goddess caressing the edge of sleep… and the days stretch longer, wider than maple alleys quietly adorning the tiara of late Indian summer as birds, cloudline and sea shells listen to a timbre of a pulsing sun. When all else is lulled quiet, there comes this certain gush of stream wading on mouths of gentleness far beyond a waterfest of effervescent ocean… Someone said morning becomes Aurora, that learning how to hear a peach or stone unravels the very skin from which it was born is allowing time to shed its leaves far beyond unknowing a heart’s need to just be: the breast of dawn spills its nectar, peeling new faces of time, shaping the width of endless harmony. A thousand times before and after, morning and night twine again in contentment... that passing through mellow eyes of any moment is the world’s way of coming back to itself. Random Mix Contest: Charlotte Puddifoot by nette onclaud.... new poem

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Date: 4/15/2014 2:20:00 AM
Oh this one is nice. Very much enjoyed
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:31:00 AM
Awesome mingling of hues of day n night ! Mesmerising words make it a sure winner Nette ! Many congrats !!
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:38:00 PM
WONDERFUL WIN ....SKAT
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:35:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations, In Charlotte's MIX, contest.... always~ Linda
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:08:00 PM
First place is the reward for a first class poem like this. Congratulations, Nettte. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/11/2014 3:40:00 PM
a superb poem here, nette, such imaginative use of language, and so many wonderful lines I can't pick a fave, all leading up to that last stellar line - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:06:00 PM
Nette, This poem is one of the best I have ever read! 7X7 My best, and faved Chuck ps Nette Do you have any contact info on Flo. Where has that wonderful poet gone? chuck
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:39:00 AM
Nette, you wove your random mix into a tight, lovely tapestry.
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:15:00 PM
Amazing, it does not feel random at all.
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Date: 4/5/2014 8:20:00 AM
I do believe it is the world's way of coming back to itself. I believe in cycles whether they be 5 years, 50, years or 500 years. We are forever coming back to where we once were....Hugs Tim
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:15:00 AM
- A beautiful poem .... with a delightful harmony, Nette!! - Good luck in the contest! - Wish you a nice weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/5/2014 12:51:00 AM
I couldn't agree with you more here. Ah, the power of a moment and how we wield it. Fantastic piece!
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Date: 4/4/2014 11:30:00 PM
What descriptions you have written here my friend! I love the way you wrote about the morning and evening's intertwining! You are a master of verse Nette! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem this evening! What a lovely piece, so peaceful your words are! Great Work!!
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