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Streets of Blood

Streets of blood She stood upon the terrace high streets of blood below The gate left open in the night, a dark sky threatens snow With swine and pearls running free her bed sheets fought the wind A tear drop fell her worried eyes at hate now once again Of drawbridge wars in endless fight to stones of castle keep A single rose a’ bloom this dawn as mothers come to weep For sons of father’s destined fall, these followed footsteps bare Along the streets so narrow, long, where death becomes aware “Enough!” she shouted far and wide “This fighting now shall end” “Take your swords and hateful spite, do not return again” And lifting high her amulet upon a staff of wood She chanted as the stone did glow this morning where she stood “Of peace, let all be felt this hour Thy breath of saddened greed Be gone, be gone, oh beast of war No longer doth thou feed Ye shadows o’er a nightfall mist Lest blood befall your hand Beyond this tree lined sacred place Be gone from this our land” When then a mighty wave did flow, the streets were cleansed of fear And there beyond horizons call the sunrise did appear And where once sat a single rose, one thousand buds did grow Of crimson red and silken gold, the sweetest fragrance flow Mothers hugged their children close as loudly trumpets blared The bloodied streets now white with snow and love by all was shared But there within the canyons lurked cast eyes of beaded red “I shall return to take this place O’ ye who think me dead” “To once more fill yon streets with blood of this ye can believe No matter what the masses want, know this, I shall not leave”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/25/2017 1:06:00 PM
I have been reading your "best poems" and I am truly, deeply impressed by your talent. Thank You for sharing your beautiful visions, heartfelt words and the encouragement, truths and inspiration in your writing.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 1:15:00 PM
Wow, thank you Lenna so very much for your uplifting comment on my poem. I am humbled by your words. I appreciate your kindness and that you are so nice to me. I am more than thrilled you enjoyed this one. Thank you again my friend.
Date: 3/9/2017 3:46:00 PM
Love to read ones like this, I've been watching The Borgia on netflix this past week :)
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Date: 3/9/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so very much Debbie. I am thrilled you found and enjoyed this one.
Date: 1/6/2017 9:15:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, Chris - Stuffed full of impressive lines! All the best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john
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Date: 1/6/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thanks so very much John. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 1/3/2017 9:37:00 AM
STRAIGHT INTO MY FAVS GOES THIS CLASSIC GEM.. A very inspirational piece my friend..
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Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:07:00 AM
Thanks so very much Robert. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 12/28/2016 8:10:00 AM
Stunning, beautifully brilliant write, Chris. You're amazing.
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Date: 12/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rebecca, I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 12/23/2016 10:10:00 PM
It's an epic piece! I so enjoy all your poems, Chris, you're one of a poet :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much Akkina for your always kind words.
Date: 12/21/2016 6:58:00 AM
Hi Chris , yes I agree that its brilliant. The warmonger could be Satan too. I think it was tricky for you to write in old English but you pulled it off superbly.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jannie, I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 12/19/2016 10:51:00 PM
Awesome poem. Should be published. Maybe society will progress enough to where, and this is my favorite bumpersticker, "what if they held a war and nobody came" ? It's amazing, 99% of the population doesn't want war, yet we're always in war. It must be mind control by the 1%, for profit, oil, etc. Maybe the truth can set us free.
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Date: 12/20/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Bruce and I couldn't agree with you more. Wouldn't it be nice if it was that easy, waving a staff to stop a war? I appreciate you reading and commenting on my poem.
Date: 12/10/2016 6:02:00 PM
Excellent poem, Chris. I loved the Old English language. Very well constructed poem, thematically and esthetically. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Freddie, I really enjoy your kind visits and encouraging comments
Date: 12/9/2016 12:56:00 PM
what a brilliant, emotive write that simply amazes me, chris... love the last stanza!... huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so very much Nette, that is such a nice thing to say to me. I am always grateful for your visits.
Date: 12/9/2016 11:36:00 AM
Oh... The content alone is so chilling and true. It's a ballad. The ballad of the ever returning war and horror, the cycle of blood and war, and mankind never growing wise... And then the form. It's flawless and wonderful and I adore it. 7 and fav.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren for your wonderful comment on my poem. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/9/2016 11:17:00 AM
A terrific piece of writing Chris.
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thanks so very much Tim.
Date: 12/9/2016 10:52:00 AM
Well written epic tale, so different from your usual style but a very appealing write, beckons the mind to recall medieval times when street were filled with blood. Soon no more hate, only love will remain.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thanks so very much John. I sometimes will move away from the flowery love poetry but usually not for very long. : )
Date: 12/9/2016 10:43:00 AM
WoW! Chris, you've penned a well written piece . Your title alone beckoned me. And as I began to read I was not disappointed. You used your words to create a spectacular scene. I could just picture heroine in this write standing on a terrace high, raising her voice for a call for peace. I agree when peace is reached evil is always lurking behind. Furthermore, I enjoy when write in that old english style. It gives the write that "Shakespearean" vibe. A without a doubt 7 and a fave:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much sweet Alexis for this wonderful and thoughtful comment on my poem. I am more than happy you enjoyed it. I have another coming in that style soon, but a warning...it is very long. : ) Thanks again my friend.
Date: 12/9/2016 10:19:00 AM
Excellent Chris, superb poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gary
Date: 12/9/2016 9:32:00 AM
Holy smokes Chris, you've done it again and then some! Chilling account, made my skin crawl, the return of the viperous swine, please say it's not so. Whoever this about, should cover their booty pronto. :) Next time, don't hold back. What a gruesomely moving tale! 7+
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I appreciate your kind words to me always. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 12/9/2016 9:27:00 AM
WOW!!! Crane-Bag! (favourites)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.

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