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Streamers Of Grief Run

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Streamers Of Grief Run

Streamers of grief run
Fly free from innermost lands
Spawn of pain from man.

(January 10, 2011  Wausau, Wisconsin)

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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  1. Date: 1/10/2011 1:35:00 PM
    I liked it. Just a suggestion though, instead of going with abstractions when you write haiku, try going with concrete images/words that will convey an immediate picture or sensation. As one famous poet said, "flee thee from abstractions." Anyway, great job though! Keep it up!