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Stream Cannot Change Course

long, thin, slenderness pathway leading to remorse stream cannot change course. (January 24, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin) (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/26/2011 11:14:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 1/26/2011 11:12:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 1/24/2011 9:37:00 PM
smile -- what a very gloom brushed perspective my dear for, where would a life be cast within such hopelessness -- thankfully there is a Light greater than ourselves to guide and lead the way back unto that symbolics yellow brick road -- very soulful verse and i wish your beauty all the best -- keep painting my dear and, i am certain in time that the colours shall gain a brighter hue -- love, christopher
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:31:00 PM
a change in path which cannot be taken because the path is already laid out, enjoyed your write Christine,..p.d.
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:19:00 PM
Good one..Very creative work..Enjoyed..Sara
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