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Strange World Whenever someone talks to you about love and illusions and promises you everything under the sun, if you remember me, don't mention my name, because you will feel true love then. If they want to know about your past - you will have to tell them a lie. Tell them that you come from a strange world. Tell them that you don't know how to love, that you don't understand love and that you have never cried. Where ever I go - I will talk about your love, like a golden dream. Forgetting the hurt, forgetting the pain - I will not tell them - that your love made me a disgrace. If they want to know about my past - i will have to tell them another lie. I will tell them that I came from a strange world, that I don't know of hurt, that I don't know of pain, that I conqurered love and that I have never cried. You will always be the the one and only love of my life, even if you come from that strange world...
09/25/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/15/2013 7:14:00 PM
I think this is wonderful advice Lucy and as always beautifully written. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/29/2013 8:23:00 AM
Very sad love story, beautiful poem!
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Date: 9/26/2013 9:05:00 AM
Emotive work about love gone bad..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:40:00 AM
True love is like gold, you have to dig up many tons of dirt just to find a speck of it, unless one is of the lucky few who finds it on the bed of the river where is waiting to be picked up! Very beautiful and touching poem, Lucy! I enjoyed it!
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:09:00 AM
heartfelt beautiful piece
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thank you much.
Date: 9/26/2013 2:14:00 AM
coming from the heart, so full of honesty.. you move me with your words, lucy... this is beautifully rendered!.:) hugggs
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/26/2013 8:08:00 AM
Thank you - those are feelings from the heart.
Date: 9/25/2013 8:03:00 PM
You have created a gem of a write with this poem my friend! You have touched my soul where love dwells, that special deep love that will never leave! I loved reading this incredible piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/25/2013 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Russell, you always have such nice comments. i'm glad that you liked this poem.
Date: 9/25/2013 2:40:00 PM
Beautiful only because beauty is hidden in it. Enjoyed a lot, my friend. Your are searching for a diamond perhaps. Loved always, bl
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/25/2013 9:39:00 PM
The beauty within the poem is the love it holds.
Date: 9/25/2013 2:07:00 PM
Hola Lucilla, An honest write form the heart..I liked this one.. Ken
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/25/2013 9:37:00 PM
Gracias Ken; Que bueno Que te gusto.
Date: 9/25/2013 1:23:00 PM
- A very beautiful poem Lucilla, a pleasure to read today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/25/2013 9:36:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/25/2013 9:32:00 AM
Lucilla this is beautiful i know exactly where you are coming from, with this,, this poem sure is the measure of it's poet....awesome...just awesome
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/25/2013 10:17:00 AM
thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 9/25/2013 7:36:00 AM
This was a very, very touching writing. An understanding & acceptance of love's strengths and flaws. A fine job, Lucilla!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/25/2013 10:19:00 AM
Thanks - love always hurts, but life goes on.

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