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Stormy Seas- Sentinel

The sentinel of stormy seas Looks beyond the thunderous waves It is the hope of weary ships And its guiding light sailors crave Amidst the mighty waves it stands Rising upon the solid rocks it must command a certain calm Its guiding light the waves can't mock And even in the darkest night Where the voice of hope seems silent it is certain to shine its light Though turbulent waves do not relent ---- 4/5/16

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Date: 4/15/2016 11:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/14/2016 6:23:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your Second Place win in 'the sentinel contest'. Sandra
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:00:00 PM
Powerful, great write
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Date: 4/6/2016 4:14:00 PM
GREAT job in this challenge, Joseph!
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Date: 4/6/2016 8:18:00 AM
The strength of your imagery places the reader within these rocky seas, to the hope of the sentinel, and hope in general. Wonderful write!
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Date: 4/6/2016 4:45:00 AM
ohh, vivid phrases, joseph... they seem to flow together wonderfully!..huggs
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:26:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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