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Storms of Life

Today a gentle breeze swept over a warm contented earth, Tossing fluffy clouds in a teasing kind of mirth Indeed before the sun had sunk, thunder roared and surged The entire Heavens parted from whence a storm emerged Wrapped in sheer perplexity, I gazed and dared compare, We people living way down here with the Heavens way up there Do we not sometimes feel gay and shine just like the sun? But worry over nothing seems to storm out all our fun? Then we act just like a cloud burst and slowly we endow, To tell the world in general that the rain is over now. Forgive a silly contrast without a single link For this is merely something of which a fool would think. 6/9/15-for contest 6/30/14 original date

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Date: 6/11/2015 4:15:00 PM
JUDY, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/11/2015 4:48:00 PM
BOOT SKAT AND BOOGIE...ALWAYS GREAT TO HEAR FROM YOU. Lil Miss Sunshine....until you hack her off, that is
Date: 6/11/2015 8:38:00 AM
Great poem, congratulations!
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/11/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thank you great guy Richard
Date: 6/11/2015 4:25:00 AM
we often make our storms needlessly Judy life is for living in the sunshine to be in balance with nature brings us peace good pen congrats on placing hugs
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/11/2015 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Shadow....appreciate it...
Date: 6/10/2015 6:39:00 PM
such beautiful imagery Judy - I dont think either of us need any more storm clouds gathering in our world - just looking for sunnier days and the old rainbow at the end:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:16:00 PM
In the midst of the storm our thoughts wander like the clouds...Congrats on a great win
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/13/2015 6:53:00 AM
Many thank yous...Joseph

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