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Desire lit passion's flame, yet lately, nothing is clear. And you cannot understand how love could just disappear. Restricted to childhood dreams, hope's no longer in control. For your reality changed, when anguish ravaged your soul. He watched your fragile-heart break, never averting his eyes. And still, you believed in him, up to the final goodbyes. Drifting between hate and love, you try to set yourself free. And yet, such feelings persist, for doubt will not let you be. Like a damaged derelict, you await the storm's demise. And yet you know, tears won't wash away a mountain of lies. (Quatrain) 7/18/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 8:32:00 AM
A lovely read with many striking lines. A powerful poem, Emile.
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Date: 7/20/2015 7:57:00 PM
Emile, amazing writing and great pic 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/20/2015 12:06:00 PM
Heart break and agony through out. Feelings well expressed. And the photo is fascinating! I don't know how you get it to move like that. So mysterious and realistic. A 7. ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/20/2015 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/20/2015 12:06:00 PM
Heart break and agony through out. Feelings well expressed. And the photo is fascinating! I don't know how you get it to move like that. So mysterious and realistic. A 7. ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:17:00 PM
heartbreaking piece with powerful word choices that highlights your beautiful lines, emile.. huggs
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/18/2015 11:20:00 PM
Eme that's a superb one n I can relate to this !!
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Date: 7/19/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thank you for your great review Upma, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 7/18/2015 5:09:00 PM
What an excellent write Emile you never fail to give your lovely..........A.M
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Date: 7/19/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, you know how to create a smile, Emile.

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