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Storm Alert Haiku Number 23

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Storm Alert Haiku Number 23

Purple black skies hang
Over mountainous sea's surge
Coastguard hears Mayday

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  1. Date: 1/2/2010 10:26:00 AM
    Yes, brings to life the threat of storm. Great haiku. thanks for your comment on my poem. Andrea

  1. Date: 12/23/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Good use of imagery. The last line was a surprise which I liked. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 8:28:00 AM
    Very impressive write. I hope everyone was alright. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/20/2009 4:23:00 PM
    sounds ominous, enjoyed reading!1

  1. Date: 11/5/2009 4:13:00 PM
    very vivid! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 3:14:00 PM
    WOW ... storm indeed ... love the purple black skies ... and the last line was really a surprise. Wonderful write here, Deirdre !!

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 7:20:00 AM
    Love l2 Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 9:07:00 AM
    Another S O S , Deirdre . Shame On Seán ....

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 4:20:00 AM
    Deirdre, this is indeed an amazing write. Thank you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 11:54:00 PM
    Nice work Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today and for the update info about 'guth'

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 5:06:00 PM
    Good use of imagery to add suspence in this poem. Good ending. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 1:07:00 PM
    I like this. Thanks....Marty

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 11:28:00 AM
    The first and middle line are excellent, nice work Deirdre...Raul