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Fiery shafts explode in light. Thunder shakes the black of night. Wailing winds shriek and cry As storm begins to fill the sky. Clouds in chaos twist and swirl Release their sting of icy peril. Sea churned white and sick with foam. Gulls in fear, no longer roam. Earth is purged of earthly pride. Hell's mad fury, while Heaven cried. written 08.29.2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/31/2016 6:40:00 PM
wow, this has a great ring to it. Just what Brian was looking for .Congrats on your great trophy win.
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Date: 9/15/2016 3:39:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/15/2016 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! ...Fran
Date: 9/15/2016 9:54:00 AM
Hell's fury captured aptly!Congrats Francis!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/15/2016 11:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:14:00 PM
Thank you, Janis! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Francis. I can hear the wind, lots of wonderfully explosive consonants :) Agnes
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 10:17:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful poem and very well deserved the top placement. Congratulations, Francis.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you, AFZAL! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 10:02:00 AM
Francis, congrats on your well deserved top placement, love the couplets :)-luloo
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thank you, luloo! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 9:48:00 AM
such wonderful couplets Francis it reads so beautifully many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thank You, Jan! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 9:15:00 AM
Beautifully written and rolls off the tongue so smoothly! Congrats on your top win, Francis :)
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, Laura! ...Fran
Date: 9/14/2016 9:11:00 AM
Excellent, TOP-winning poem, Francis--deserving of a 7-PLUS! Janice
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/14/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! ...Fran
Date: 8/29/2016 10:24:00 AM
An amazing, powerful write, Francis, filled with alternate meanings! Blessings!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/29/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 8/29/2016 9:44:00 AM
What a punch this packs - loved that ... CayCay
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/29/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay.
Date: 8/29/2016 8:41:00 AM
Very good - captures what the title says
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/29/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Martin.
Date: 8/29/2016 8:37:00 AM
I see this happening sooner than we think. Loved the couplets Fran.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/29/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Tim.
Date: 8/29/2016 8:09:00 AM
Oh so well described..actually i'm living in stormy weather and its so cold grrrr...:) Sunita
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/29/2016 8:59:00 PM
Thank you Sunita.

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