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Storm

The soft rustling of leaves touching my ear, singing of mighty storms coming, the strength at last to heave my doubt, my fear of peace, or bring glory at least and rip me from the soft sounds of the present loft. The rain falling, so fierce, washing me clean, bringing at last a new living, thunder crashes, roars, pierce my ears and give me war, through blood, mud and gore my heart a fitting home is found as never known.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/7/2016 5:46:00 AM
An image packed, fire cracker of a poem. Great stuff.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:26:00 PM
Jacob, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:02:00 PM
Hi Jacob, coming back here to enjoy your power pack poem filled with awesome imagery. I would not change a thing. Perfect for a free verse poem. I'm looking forward in reading a few more poems from you today, Hope you stop by my poems soon. Enjoy yourself on this awesome site. Have yourself a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:59:00 PM
Hi Jacob, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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