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Storm

It gives a fearful feeling my world will collapse The tree trembles cannot hold the rough Strong wind blows with a cascade rain Storm doesn’t seem to seize The tree trembles cannot hold the rough I am not a banyan tree to withstand your storm Storm doesn’t seem to seize I do not know how to walk on the weather you chose I am not a banyan tree to withstand your storm Strong wind blows with a cascade rain I do not know how to walk on the weather you chose It gives a fearful feeling my world will collapse

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Date: 7/20/2013 10:39:00 AM
In answer to your question, you are a woman within the storm of a rocky volatile relationship feeling out of control, hoping that your roots are as strong as those of the Banyan tree so that you will not be swept away. You feel the world around you is falling apart.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2013 4:25:00 PM
Did I miss anything???
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/20/2013 10:49:00 AM
thank you yes
Date: 7/19/2013 7:48:00 AM
Good morning, enjoyed reading a second time. I hope you have a most excellent day.
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Date: 7/17/2013 11:20:00 PM
Excellent. A truly magnificent write about storm. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 7/17/2013 12:48:00 PM
A most excellent Pantoum, your best one ! I am proud of how you have developed your technique. A truly magnificent poem.
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Date: 7/17/2013 9:19:00 AM
- Storm .... powerful experience. - Very well written Manel! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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