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Stillness Surrounds

Red earth, ancient rocks A steel gray sky infusing Soundless reflections. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 14, 2010 Poetic Form: Haiku

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James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 4:41:00 AM

Just beautiful Dane Ann >> James

John Beam

Date: 2/22/2010 6:51:00 PM

congratulations on win Dane hope for many more

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 5:27:00 PM

Just now seeing the winners of THIS one. Congrats on your BIG win! andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/20/2010 2:20:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, dear Dane Ann. I like the "soundless reflection". Congratulations for a well deserved first place. Thank you for your comment. I feel Glorious now :) Love, Iolanda

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/19/2010 9:45:00 PM

tranquil silence but capturing words to honor their existence. Really a winner on this, Dane Ann. Congratulations. (^_^) Noel.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/19/2010 4:05:00 PM

Dane~Ann Congratulations on your first place win!! Love Laura :)

Mike Butler

Date: 2/19/2010 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations! This is a very lovely Haiku. -Mike

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/19/2010 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations on a wonderful Haiku and a first place win, well deserved. Caryl

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/19/2010 8:10:00 AM

1st place!! Congratulations to you Dane Anne. Well deserved, and enjoy this honor! ~ Carrie

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2010 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on first place !!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/19/2010 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest (Morning Ambiance) Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 2/19/2010 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann...Beautiful Haiku...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2010 4:24:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st placw WIN in the Morning Ambiance contest.. a wonderful description of the photo exactly.. enjoy .. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/19/2010 4:16:00 AM

Congrats ! you've captured the scene just right

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/19/2010 2:34:00 AM

Picture converted to great Haiku words , DA . Well done on your deserved win ....

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/19/2010 12:34:00 AM

A worthy winner Dane Ann. The words compliment the picture perfectly. well done...love Margaret

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/18/2010 9:37:00 PM

DASJ, congratulations in winning my contest...Raul

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/16/2010 1:11:00 AM

Your first lines sets the tone perfectly, really enjoyed this haiku Dane-Ann :) Thanks as well for all your comments :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 4:25:00 PM

DASJ, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2010 3:14:00 PM

wow, this is a great haiku, Dane Ann, and thanks for your comments on Cinder Girl. Luv, Andrea