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Still Looking For It

lost a long time ago still looking for it--- my missing heart © kash poet 2012 ============= Placement: 8th;(March 2012) Contest: Missing Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2012 3:41:00 PM

Great senryu, Kash. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/12/2012 5:33:00 PM

thump, thump, thump Congrad's Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Kash. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2012 8:26:00 AM

congrats Kash on a super write aned win luv.. this ones is simply amazing luv..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/12/2012 8:23:00 AM

congratulations on your win! simple, yet deep. makes me wonder what happened...

M.I.A .

Date: 3/11/2012 8:51:00 PM

so totally get it, simple yet so true. beautiful Senryu, Kash

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2012 1:52:00 AM

and the poet too

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2012 1:51:00 AM

and the poet too

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2012 1:51:00 AM

Ouch.. a very emotive post Kash...One which goes to my fav..Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 8:00:00 PM

oh .. a write of deep emotiion Kash... hope u have found that lovely heart of yours by tonight luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2012 1:35:00 PM

Your heart i still there, Kash, or you wouldn't be able to write so beautifully. Perhaps when you find what is missing, you'll see my memory and agility lying in the same spot. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2012 1:35:00 AM

soupmail

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/9/2012 5:53:00 PM

very touching!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2012 3:54:00 PM

ahhh, Kashinath, this is sweet. you must be the tin man!!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2012 2:48:00 PM

kashi!...why do you do this to me!.. i'm speechless!.. a fav senryu that rakes my heart... stunning!... you are right about the dodoitsu; i did it at 4am, so i was half-asleep.. been having bad technical glitches here on soup, waaaah!... win it--- for sure!..:) huggs!.. hope you'll visit! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2012 1:18:00 PM

Serious love affair that you must have had..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/9/2012 9:45:00 AM

This sounds so sad. Need to find the new heart. Great senryu. love phyl

Kash Poet
Date: 3/10/2012 9:13:00 PM

Hahahaha......enjoyed your comment Phyl.