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Still I Know You

oh baby, if you came a little closer my heart would easily detect your pain. oh baby let our words not be in vain i have wandered around this world you try to hide but still i see you you're beautiful. but you're afraid. why are you so afraid? my intentions aren't to hurt you nor to drive you insane still i see your cracks underneath all that foil open up to me let our flames blow free i'll love you... if you'd love me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/7/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thanzie Due, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thanzie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:21:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Thanzie :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Thanzie Due
Date: 11/15/2015 11:32:00 AM
thank you very much Anne! i hope to be hearing from you again soon

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