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Still

I want to know you more than this shower me with your love Take away my sin all my tears all the times I cried Replace each tear drop with a tender holy kiss of forgiveness and grace Smile down on me when i fail and let me know its all okay i dont want to feel the guilt take it all from me so that i can stand free in awe of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 4:24:00 PM
I am not religious at all,but this piece speaks to me! I love your honesty of your own flaws with a desire to change for faith and love of god... The creepy and amazing thing is there is a song called Still by Alanis Morissette that pretty much is like god's answer to the world and all ppl who want to change but have done bad, wrong, evil, etc... It's really beautiful and you may like it... Thanks for this amazing piece
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Date: 10/16/2010 6:19:00 AM
you must forgive yourself BIG HUGS!!! Light & Love
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