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Steps

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Steps

steps crackle in the morning sun - frost holds fast

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:51:00 AM
    I find myself very connected to the natural physicality you paint in your haiku. You do it so well. I'm envious !!

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 12:40:00 PM
    *cont'd* -- My suggestion, is to continue and expand some of those more subjective directions/styles within your haiku....I find haiku such as those to be a lot more fulfilling in this day and age.

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 12:37:00 PM
    I think this is one of your best 'classic' style haiku. Su, I was perusing through the "New - Poems" list yesterday, moreso in the mood for reading without leaving many comments. I was going to come back to leave a comment on a string of haiku that you had posted. The post has since been removed. The clearly objective 'peach tin' haiku is very well done, and I also enjoyed some of the new directions you took with the more subjective haiku.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:12:00 AM
    very nice

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Suzette, you captured the icy winter morning, well, Constance