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Steam Train Troubles

Steam Train Troubles Percival the steward of the train Ordered foie gras and oysters too But left them on the station platform like a fool Wealthy customers will find this rather tedious Trips from Switzerland to Germany can be quite mundane There is plenty of coal though to keep the engine going Steaming over rail and snow Not too many murders are expected this go round Business is much slower this time of year Train travel lost its luster over time and customers as well It is quieter with poorer clientele around A handful of rich still occupy first class Hang out about the open bar up there Mr. Smith forgot his ticket His wife is having an affair with Percival The conductor wants them both arrested For their blatant misconduct most unpleasant Guns come out inside a tunnel entrance Train covered sights and sounds inside the cab in there When it exited, Percival was dead Natural causes were to blame With a bullet in his brain Hundred dollar bills were scooped up from the floor By witnesses who saw nothing but the trees outside Steam engine rolled along the tracks as usual Taking truth and reason with it through the snow Created on 1/14/15 for Shadow Hamilton - “Railway Journeys” Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/1/2015 1:55:00 PM
EARL, CONGRATULATIONS on your RAILWAY JOURNEY win *ALWAYS* SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:18:00 PM
Hi SKAT, Thank you so much for commenting. Have a wonderful day. Earl
Date: 1/26/2015 6:10:00 PM
All we need is an Inspector Clouseau on the case. Fun trip. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:06:00 PM
Hi John, Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it. Sorry for responding late. I have not been getting my emails for the past few days. Have a great night. Earl
Date: 1/26/2015 5:58:00 AM
congrats on the well deserved win Earl.
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:11:00 PM
Hi Nadiya! Thank you so much. I hope you enjoyed it. Sorry I'm responding late. I have been missing a lot of emails for the past several days. I appreciate your commenting. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/25/2015 11:54:00 PM
Lovely descriptive write, congrats on the win,
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:16:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your winning poem as well. Have a great day today. Earl
Date: 1/25/2015 3:48:00 PM
Earl, congratulations on your 1st Place win for your amazing, intriguing poem Wow...dangerous living in those days! Loved your write. Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:09:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. Fortunately no real people were killed in the making of my poem. I never met a Percival in my life. It just sounded like an old fashioned name of someone working on a steam train back in the day. I enjoyed your great entry in the contest. Congratulations on your excellent poem and great win. Earl
Date: 1/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:55:00 PM
Hi Jan. Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed it. I hope things are good with you and your family. Earl
Date: 1/25/2015 1:38:00 PM
Earl,a 7 and congratulations on your win, love your descriptive write. Blessings eve
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:51:00 PM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed your winning poem/story also. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/25/2015 1:27:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Earl a superb poem hugs
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:53:00 PM
Hi Shadow, Thank you so much. I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it and hope you found it entertaining. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/16/2015 8:08:00 AM
Ha ha, literally the best one I have read so far for the contest. 7 all the way!
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Date: 1/16/2015 8:32:00 AM
Hi Richard, Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest and comments. Earl
Date: 1/14/2015 11:56:00 PM
An intriguing murderer mystery, Earl...I love this narrative. Well done and best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:34:00 AM
Hi Rhonda! Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. I'm glad you liked it. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/14/2015 12:23:00 PM
Vivid imagery Earl this is quite deep and dark - great write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/14/2015 1:20:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you. As you know, I like to spice up my works with a little drama from time to time. I wonder if there is a Percival in the world? I have never met anyone with that name. It just struck me as someone unusual who would end up in trouble on the train. Have a pleasant day. Earl

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