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The blue hour arrives, a period between morning and dusk. Twilight reflects the fading of your love-light for my heart aches when our sunset weeps. Hints of deep indigo and orange bleed across the sky-- the clouds, the ocean, everything drowns into the horizon--birds and grass . And I cannot grasp that dot in your eyes, so lay me down by your rosy leaves and forget not how we shivered, feverish when in tears, we vowed to stay, a time eternal. John Lawless, Poetry Unhinged 28 Aug 2016

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Date: 9/11/2016 8:33:00 PM
ohhh, this pulls me like a pendulum; i like the sense of unknowing... sweet congrats and huggs, noel
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Date: 8/31/2016 8:16:00 PM
Noel, something about this poem just kept drawing me back to spend more time with it. Some great imagery and easy flow. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:15:00 PM
Noel, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/27/2016 5:01:00 PM
Just lovely, Noel - such imagery! CayCay
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