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State of Bliss

I found my love in a twisted haste As we fell in love I saw my fate Eleven days was all it took To write our love story in a book We have married with no delay We made our vow in a sunny day Children came along the way To keep up with life, so they say Your actions planted in my mind Love for me you could never find I hate to admit but it is true All in me are feeling blue Figuring out my days to come All is left is to be alone Fixing my sad and shattered heart To hide my feelings I have no art If I could ask a God or star To be loved it would be by far The first wish I would ask for That is all I ask, nothing more My granted wish is all it takes To put a smile into my face Daydream and hope in a roll In State of Bliss It would be my soul

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/28/2024 6:28:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed

Juanita Smalls

Date: 3/28/2020 8:37:00 PM

Very nice write. Keep writing Daniela!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 12:53:00 AM

DANIELA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2015 7:11:00 AM

Wow, love it...skat

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 9/20/2012 10:08:00 AM

Very beautiful and sincere!

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Vesna, best regards!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/19/2012 3:48:00 PM

Excellent piece of ones heart in Poetry... Well done and welcome to the Soup!!! hugs and a smile always Michael

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Michael, indeed sometimes is difficult to smile, but that is live, with sad and good times! Today I am smiling with all this good comments!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/19/2012 10:51:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Daniela. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 09/19/2012

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:48:00 PM

Hi Carol, the sun is shining today! I am reading all this good comments about my writing and it is making me really happy! thank you very much!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/19/2012 8:44:00 AM

Lovely write Daniela! You paint with words very well!-even when you tell a sad tale. Nice!very nice!

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:50:00 PM

Hi Vicky I paint this words for your eyes to rejoice. I hope I can do the same with other poems. thank you!

Chidozie Uche O.

Date: 9/18/2012 11:32:00 AM

Enjoyed really, a wonderful love story, but at some point the poet mood changed, does it mean that the love put up a new dimension then..... Poetry.

Daniela Angeja
Date: 9/18/2012 5:07:00 PM

Well, if things does not work, even though you tried everything, the only thing left to do is to move on. Yes it is sad, but we have to find a way to be happy. Might be the love of the family or perhaps, if God so wish, to find our real soulmates.