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I'd like to welcome to the stage, a man of wide girth, I'd like to add, he wasn't like this at birth. Oh how time has treated him well,all that goodness can be seen, when he stretches to the sky, and out flops his jelly belly. I guess working at Mac Donald's, isn't the best place to be, a burger for you, and three burgers for me. Never mind little brother, it's bout what's in the inside, doesn't matter that you eat enough, to feed a small empire. I know it's only comfort food, because you feel really sad, but it's OK brother, you don't have to feel bad. Just because I got all the good looks, and left overs where yours, it's hard work being so dang good looking, constantly adored. Welcome to the soup my brother, we've only just begun, and to those that choose to follow us, now it's time to have some fun. M.Mahauariki © 2012

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Date: 2/3/2012 9:11:00 PM
Murray, reading your poetry will make you laugh and thank you! You are one of my favorite poets. Great Job!
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 2/3/2012 9:28:00 PM
Yeah I can't be serious all the time...
Date: 2/2/2012 10:09:00 PM
Murry..nice slam to follow... had fun reading... p.s... When I first join the soup... i had lots of slamming rounds..lol..i'm the reason they removed..it.. now it's only a catagory... but Oh''well... we use to have fun doing it... read some of my first... my real slam poems.. i won't even post here... wish i could... I love slamming.. maybe in the future we can slam... Here I slammed other poets... rated PG.. ha ha//get it..pd..
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 2/2/2012 10:51:00 PM
yeah this is the hard part of slamming here, gota keep it green and clean
Date: 2/2/2012 11:58:00 AM
Just a note to all souper's I just read that slamming isn't allowed?? well not in a negative context I think. Can someone please clarify this for me please... Slamming is something both my brother do all the time to each other, It's intent has always been to inspire positive change by looking at each other flaws... in a humorous context of course.
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Date: 2/2/2012 10:09:00 PM
wow...brothers...
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James Mahauariki
Date: 2/2/2012 3:08:00 PM
hear hear big brother, worst case scenario, we have to find another forum to slam each other! either way im looking forward to seeing what we come up with this time, and anyone who is offended by our matarial, i sincerly apologise on behalf of my big brother and myself! it is all meant in fun

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