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Stars Splash

The sea had climbed the mountain peaks,
And shouted to the stars
To come to play: and down they came
Splashing in happy wars.
Gilbert Chesterton 

Stars Splash

Fire and water 
cancel one another
And I am flesh in
the splash of elements
not worn down by centuries
but able to soar the stars

Earth and wind will 
claim me
Scatter me on the sea
dying for a war
cell by cell
When all that is gone
battle by battle
Then will I be free?

Where seas, fountain
once more, through
a rain of stars.

 Suzanne Delaney

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Suzzane a great imagery. fountain to rain stars. Great one Suzzane. (:v Jenish

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Hi Su I like the use of figurative language in your poem. It is as if the sea and water and all the elements mentioned in this piece take on a complete human form. A very nice poem.

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:59:00 AM
    Wow! A great write my dear. Well penned. Thanks for ur wonderful and encouraging comments on my poems and making me part of your family! Am honored Suz. I assure u all that am yet to give my best to u. Love alwaz, B.O.E

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:55:00 AM
    I am inspired to better work with every poem of yours that I read. Wondrous stuff!

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:39:00 AM
    such creative energy in this one, seetie. You always come up with such interesting topics and figurative language.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Yes, Suz-D, Earth and wind will claim you for they have created you but there is something more superior in you that no element can take it away: YOUR SOUL! Yes, free will you be once every cell of yours dies away BUT alive you will remain! Thoughtful and thought-provoking poem! Thank you!