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Stars

Bright in the sky they twinkle, spark and shine but if you listen carefully, you can hear their soft whine Wondering what made them sad, I went about listing it - the star-lighter might not have come, so some stars may not have lit They probably lost all their power, or perhaps started to decay. some new stars might have found that they had completely lost their way. Running out of options I decided to move on - and when I saw the moon arriving, the stars were happy as a fawn So walking up and down, they spread joy by their birth but the sun started to rise in the midst of their mirth.

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Date: 3/12/2022 3:43:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 5/23/2015 10:31:00 PM
this is sweet, you have them walking about as if they are people! I love how they are filled with mirth in the last part!
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Date: 5/23/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! This was written very long back :D :D
Date: 11/5/2014 11:17:00 AM
They probably lost all their power, or perhaps started to decay, yes Sneha fact is that stars decay like anything else in the universe. Have you read the stories of cosmos? "but the sun started to rise, in the midst of their mirth". poor stars. Sweet poem...I have added your poem to my fav list. You have got a perfect 10. ...love...R
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Date: 10/17/2014 7:02:00 AM
really love how you drew this excellent piece
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Date: 6/17/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest with this poem! I enjoyed it. I'll try to put up more contests where a wide variety of people can enter, enjoy themselves, and get their work viewed. Congratulations on the win. It was wonderful.
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Date: 6/15/2014 6:55:00 PM
Nice star-play. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/15/2014 6:03:00 AM
Sneha, nice poem and congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/15/2014 2:14:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your favorite poem, congrats on the well deserved win, Sneha
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Date: 6/15/2014 12:10:00 AM
nice win Sneha. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/14/2014 10:56:00 PM
SNEHA. Congratulations with your own "Favorite Poem, entered in Carol's XOOL contest... Yeah, we all Win... What a sweet Deal... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2014 2:55:00 AM
" Wondering what made them sad, I went about listing it, the star-lighter might not have come, so some stars might not have lit" that phrase, or whatever you call it, is original, unique and so beautiful, enjoyed very much!
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Date: 4/23/2014 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations! Wonderful poem
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:36:00 AM
Congratulation on the fine win with this lovely poem, sneha
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Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2014 9:56:00 AM
Dear Sir, Thank you very much for your comment ! I would also like to congratulate you on your selected poem !!
Date: 4/21/2014 9:37:00 PM
Sneah, Congratulations, --Enjoyed your awesome win. Thank you so much for the support... Always & forever *Linda
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