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Staring On Sunset

Perched near the bend where Sunset slides From infamy to ecstasy I watch the summer roll and stroll, as the parade of cars, stars and those hiding within themselves Fuel the sun to ensure Its on-time for its casting couch audition with the all-hands blue sky and tainted orange-red cousins looking to turn an LA trick into thin air Sex bleeds inadvertently with each smile, tush, rack and package willing to come out and play youth is eternal Whether you're undergraduate or overfortunate Slick shades hiding the clear and present danger fit for the unintended consequences waiting down the Boulevard its Summer its Sunset And dreams are in store. (8/13/13)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2015 3:09:00 PM
Hello Lovechild, this poem's incredible. Amazing roll and stroll summer takes upon us. A dreamy way of looking into the unknown. Love SKAT
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Suburban Lovechild
Date: 2/23/2015 11:37:00 PM
Thx SKAT, and if you've ever lay witness to Sunset Blvd, there's an unknown around every corner, especially around where this bend occurs.
Date: 2/22/2015 5:26:00 AM
Youth is eternal, the heart is always young, the mind may say otherwise, but in the sunset of life, one can be forgiven for thinking he's left everything to the dice. Intelligent. Intriguing. A mind experience. Smiles all the way from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim
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Date: 2/23/2015 11:40:00 PM
Thx Kim, I appreciate your reading and share of your thoughts. Sunset is a state of mind, even more so when you're in the thick of it while scribbling thoughts.

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