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Stardust and Moonbeam

Celestial bodies pin points of light Punctuates the purple-black of night Stardust dancing shimmering bright Stargazing brings me much delight Moonbeam's golden rays of light Descends its beam this night I wish I may I wish I might Climb upon its beam so bright Stardust cloaks me with its invite Hair streaks with star trails of light My fingers adorn with gems so bright Eyes twinkling from this magical sight Stars dimming from daylight A dream vision within the night Awaken I must in morning's bright A finger still wears a pin point of light By Connie Gildersleeve

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Gypsyof Essence

Date: 3/9/2013 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations !!! A really well written poem. :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/9/2013 2:44:00 PM

Gypsyof thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 10:10:00 PM

Many many congrats for this wonderful win Connie.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/4/2013 4:39:00 AM

Thank you Tahera for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 3:03:00 PM

Connie congrats on your win...David

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/4/2013 4:40:00 AM

Thank you David for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2013 9:50:00 AM

Connie, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~ PD

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/4/2013 4:41:00 AM

Thank you For your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/30/2013 11:06:00 AM

I think I'm getting stars in my eyes! Nice poem. "Gems so bright", good picture.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/30/2013 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Isalah for your lovely comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/16/2013 11:45:00 PM

This is so awesome Connie, I've taught my 6 yr old g-daughter to make a wish on a star, & wish I may, wish I might along with prayers. Going into my fav's, thank you for reading my Missing Pieces" ;}

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/17/2013 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Deb for your wonderful comment. I enjoyed penning these words, brought me back to childhood. Enjoy your grand daughter. I have no grand children but have a dog. She'll listen, and I'm given a lick, not quite the same as a child's kiss. But I'll take the lick happily. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2012 6:41:00 PM

If this is for the stardust contest, I think Gail will really like it. It's very pretty!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/30/2012 8:20:00 AM

Yes it is Andrea. Thank you for stopping by and your lovely comment. Happy New Years, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2012 7:15:00 AM

A very lovely poem, Connie !!! HAPPY NEW YEAR 2013!! / / oxox Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 6:09:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Anne. Happy New Year to you too. Warm Wishes Always, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/28/2012 10:01:00 PM

This is such a beautiful write, very beautiful write! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful and amazing poem this evening! What a powerful verse you have presented here, a masterful display of great images! Wondrous Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 6:12:00 PM

Thank you Russell for your wonderful comment. Thanks for stopping buy to read it. Happy New Years, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 4:33:00 PM

lovely poem xoxo pd

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/29/2012 6:13:00 PM

Thank you PD for your comment. Best Wishes in 2013 and beyond. Warm Smiles, Connie

Stephen Parker

Date: 12/28/2012 1:53:00 AM

Love the third stanza! The dazzling light-display touches you in such a gripping, titillating manner. Enjoyed your scintillating, starry night ecstasy!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/28/2012 2:26:00 PM

Thank you much for your comment. Too bad we can't live physically in the make believe world except in the mind. Best wishes in 2013 and beyond. Warm Smiles, Connie

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/28/2012 1:47:00 AM

Lovely write Connie! Beautiful descriptions of a wonderful creation. Very nice!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/28/2012 2:38:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Vicky. Wouldn't it be nice to live in a made up world. Warm Smiles, Connie

Deb Wilson

Date: 12/27/2012 6:23:00 PM

I like this poem alot Connie...well done...love,Deb

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/28/2012 2:43:00 PM

Thank you Deb on your lovely comment. Best wishes in 2013 and beyond. Warm Smiles, Connie