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Stardust

Starlight, stardust shining brightly glistening twinkling glittery setting the dark skies alight giving a perfect backlight passionately runs riot brimful and without limit starlight, stardust shining brightly glistening twinkling glittery contest: Stardust in an octelle written 07/05/2013 by Shadow Hamilton

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Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:23:00 PM

Shadow, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:30:00 PM

Ty Skat hope all is well? Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2013 1:29:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work...Enjoyed reading this one today...Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:31:00 PM

hi Sara ty so nice of you Shadow x smiles

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2013 4:11:00 AM

this has a childlike tone, so innocently done, shadow... congrats on your win inmy contest.. do check my blog!...:) huggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/17/2013 12:11:00 PM

Hi Nette ty for placing me glad you enjoyed it ty for running contest Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2013 9:18:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem, well done! Congratulations.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/17/2013 12:12:00 PM

hi Richard nice of you to read appreciated Shadow x smiles

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2013 2:04:00 PM

nice one, sha... reminding you that an octelle is: (8 lines/ syllables:8-8-7-7-7-7-8-8/ rhyme:aa,bb,cc,aa First and last couplets identical)... all the best!..:) huggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/10/2013 2:55:00 PM

hi Nette ty corrected it I missed the count in the 5th line Shadow x smiles