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Star Seeker

The winter is dwindling! the winter is dwindling! There is an ancient warmth returning to kiss this land with warm love ---- draw her in from the shadow of icy-looms, Spinning sure-spun recipes, (warmer the beams solar-soft) the sun becomes a star; deeper in day to bloom many a seed for her delicate gaze, And the warmth of winds blow from fire-nymph lips; There is growing in heaven's calendar, gardens to till, lawns to mow..... Should an angel choose a swifter spring.... Draw children from their open windows; to parks and balls and sandbox thrills, let the sun be some prima donna, some little genius, anxious to shine (Deeper)

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Date: 4/26/2014 1:03:00 AM
The four season on there way let them gather and start to play... awesome write... Gina
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Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/26/2014 10:24:00 AM
My pleasure.... Smiles...... Gina
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/26/2014 9:37:00 AM
:-) (wink.wink) Many thanks Gina!
Date: 3/26/2014 1:19:00 PM
I was beautiful lost along the way. Warm and sensual......... Love it! ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/24/2014 4:50:00 PM
This is lovely. I love the sun, she always knows how to make us feel better. Well written and delicate.
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Date: 3/24/2014 4:23:00 PM
Keith my name is Demetrios! Ha-ha!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/25/2014 11:07:00 AM
Very clever Demetrios! Yes, and your poetry shines! BTW I once loved a Greek woman, the love of my life... I never ate better! (cooking is an art)(and she sure could cook!)
Date: 3/24/2014 4:11:00 PM
A phantasmagoria of expressions that the Spring competes in beauty! Excellently written dear Keith!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/24/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine, you shall replace the warmth of the sun for me.....(for at least a week!) I like using brackets sometimes for emphasis, or sometimes the word seems 'naked' or it somehow is dropped too suddenly --- (Deeper) instead of just 'Deeper' for me is more effective here. Many thanks again, and may we both have many more great shares together!
Date: 3/24/2014 3:09:00 PM
Ow that star which shines day and night which such beauty..A prima donna in ballerina style : ).I love the way your mind travels to unique beautiful ideas and the words you put here and there in brackets make the poem more intriguing.Well done.Im adding you to my favs poet list : )..Dont want to lose this exquisite powtry in this big bowl of soup.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/24/2014 3:11:00 PM
With not which..oops
Date: 3/24/2014 2:09:00 PM
Star Seeker Is excellently penned and the warmth is welcomed to Texas! Keith, you are talented to a T ! 7, My best, chuck
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