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Star Gazing

You twinkle, twinkle like a star, it makes me wonder what you are? Perhaps it’s since you travel far, it’s lights from your galactic car. Or is the gaze, I clearly see, quite firmly fixed, not flying free, but looking down and, could it be, your spying eye is aimed – at ME! ~
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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:36:00 AM
    Great winning work..Enjoyed reading you take on Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:11:00 PM
    this is really cute. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:04:00 PM
    Charles, Congratulations with your awesome win in Lisa's " Bringin' in the Stars contest." always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Very simple and beautiful... Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Nice take......congratulations

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 9:19:00 PM
    nicely done Charles. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:25:00 AM
    Charles congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 12:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Charles. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:56:00 PM
    Clever entry and great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 6:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on oyur winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
    congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:22:00 PM
    congrats Charles on a super write and win for big brother theme luv

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Good one, Charles. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:15:00 AM
    "lights from your galactic car" That's a winner!

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Excellent ,my first thought was 'big brothers watching. Good luck in the contest. Anne