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Star Dreams

A feather star begins dancing softly it moves in current feelings within the deep blue ocean singing out in emotions craving food it desires waves touching song plays on pipes one tune sweetly whistles from the deepest organ under one sky a star falling trails in magic we dream the same dream wishing for that day in loves name we embrace together emotions kiss a dream that is you

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Date: 11/26/2013 7:25:00 PM
What a lovely dream to have, Liam! This is a very beautiful and romantic piece of poetry! So well done, my friend!...Thank you for the great comments. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 11/24/2013 1:08:00 PM
dreamy romace becomes you, partner... a moment that extends into life...amazing span in this piece..:) huggs
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Date: 11/23/2013 2:03:00 PM
"Emotions Kiss" Delightful read Liam
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:56:00 AM
- Beautiful dreaming, Liam ......sweet kiss under the stars :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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