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Oh! Luminous Star Visible light so far up above Music plays in your silent tranquil night As we wish upon a star Firefly’s beacon in velvet twilight Hypnotic faceted beguiling shooting stars Shining galaxies since beginning of time Guiding ships through darken briny seas Oh! Luminous Star Visible light so far up above Music plays in your silent tranquil night As we wish upon a star Ancient stars moving slowly Through time awakening the fire of romantic souls With feelings of ecstasy Love that is planted wanting for more Oh! Luminous Star Visible light so far up above Music plays in your silent tranquil night As we wish upon a star A kiss of your breath intimate heartbeat rhythm of our dreams Your glamour which turns life into a golden haze Scattered stars align in our sky The existence of space and time Oh! Luminous Star Visible light so far up above Music plays in your silent tranquil night As we wish upon a star Truth in your art will together thrive In your light, I learn how to love In your beauty to write a poetic verse In your energy to slumber in your lullaby Oh! Luminous Star Visible light so far up above Music plays in your silent tranquil night I'll always wish upon you, my Luminous Star

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Susan Gentry

Date: 12/23/2015 2:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win in contest!

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/22/2015 8:55:00 PM

Beautiful, Eve,well done. Viv x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/22/2015 3:53:00 PM

Eve, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 12/22/2015 12:44:00 PM

This is beautiful, Eve!! Lovely content, and the repetitive lines have served you well. ~ Congratulations on this worthy podium finish! ~ Regards & hugs // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/22/2015 10:12:00 AM

I simply love star poems and this one is a great beauty my friend! Congrats on your win!

Joseph May

Date: 12/22/2015 8:42:00 AM

Congrats on your win Eve

Michael Tor

Date: 12/22/2015 7:10:00 AM

Beautiful Eve love the imagery you shared.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 1:28:00 AM

Lovely write n win Eve.. big congrats!

Skat A

Date: 12/21/2015 11:42:00 PM

Eve, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/20/2015 10:41:00 PM

Oh Eve this is so beautiful, I will wish upon a star and wish you and your family a Merry Christmas,, Take care...........Vera....SM

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 10:53:00 PM

Thank you dear friend I hope you Peter are doing great. hugs Eve

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/20/2015 11:20:00 AM

Exquisite portrait of love having excellent rhythm hidden in heart. Clear 7 i feel. My favorite. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 11:26:00 AM

B.L., thank you so much for your constant support, this kind of compliment encourages me to improve. Hugs dear friend

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 11:14:00 AM

I saw no indication that you entered this write in the 'star' contest. I sure reads like a winner to me. Truly enjoyable and pretty ... CayCay

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 11:24:00 AM

CayCay,I did. I didn't know it was for old poems, but my husband said it is old 2 hours old so I went ahead and posted. I hope she doesn't mind. But I did write it for her.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/20/2015 4:19:00 AM

g'morning sweet one. Waking to your words made me want to look at the stars. Second verse is my favorite...smooch pooch

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 11:31:00 AM

It reminded me, excuse me for being personal, but the parking and getting very romantic at night or the old move theaters with the speakers out side the car.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/20/2015 2:07:00 AM

So beautiful Eve, does your hubby know how lucky he is to have you?

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 11:33:00 AM

My husband said yes because I tell him all the time. I have always waited on him hand and foot. I am of the old school and I love doing it. Hugs dear friend

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/19/2015 9:24:00 PM

I wish upon the eve that happiness was conceived by what we should Believe in an effort to retrieve the thing money can not achieve which can't even be stolen by thieves so I Thank Him For The talents you have received....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/19/2015 10:51:00 PM

Amen! I always sign my canvas Eve Roper IJNA , In Jesus Name Amen. Thank you Mr. Boddie

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2015 8:18:00 PM

Wow Eve this has absolutely blown me way with the imagery - love the impact of the repeated lines - you are a beacon of light on a dark day on soup:-) hugs Jan xx7 and fave xx

Eve Roper
Date: 12/19/2015 9:16:00 PM

Awe! Your so precious, thank you. Hugs dear friend