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Waves of emotion crashing all around me ... yet still I stand strong. Contest In one line (Monoku#10) sponsored by PD 03~29~16

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2016 5:03:00 PM

The emotions are there, so is the positive outlook! Well done, Jan:) gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 9:02:00 AM

No I entered it Paul:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/31/2016 4:19:00 AM

Hey, Jan...are you sure you did not forget to enter this for the contest?

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2016 5:04:00 PM

Thanks so much for all your encouraging words and support Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/29/2016 10:04:00 PM

This is beautiful, nice. Good luck in the PC

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 10:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Lewis:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/29/2016 7:01:00 PM

That's a step up on me, great Monoku! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 8:23:00 PM

It is actually quite a challenge to write a 1 line poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/29/2016 6:49:00 PM

Nice poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 8:23:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2016 2:21:00 PM

Jan, this is OUTSTANDING !!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 2:27:00 PM

Oh wow thank you so much - I hope Linda likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/29/2016 9:17:00 AM

Well done Jan. I get the same feeling here as in Andrea's. The contrasting of the strong silent and the brash emotive.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Tim - I'm not sure if it's what PD is looking for - I am amazed Andrea and I went for similar themes as it happened in another poem recently too:-) hugs Jan xx