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Standing On a Foot and a Knee

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Executing my pace to destiny with an added pair of legs makes it a perfect symphony the long queue of my aspirations and visions will translate into reality by passing through the doors of your views. Your focus, ideology and belief, nothing more I expect corresponding to mine, like a lock and key that I respect. One can expertly execute, but two will effectively deliver every bridge has two ends and no coin has just one side. Little wonder! The body’s functionality naturalizes in pairs. the limbs, eyes, ears and lungs; even the mouth, nose and the brain house anatomically paired contents. This rounded finger-loving element just confirms our steady Life’s movement. My mind rings with an uproar of oceans but not anointing that finger becomes my dreadful superstition. Now! Let’s honour the “pair-religion” as I… Stand on a foot and a knee, engaging you with the popular line “Will you marry me?”

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Date: 12/14/2014 2:37:00 AM
This is stunning work Funom. Loved the analogies of the "coupling" in the penultimate stanza and the line "but not anointing that finger becomes my dreadful superstition." Well crafted and quite poetic! Keep a'writing, my friend!
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Date: 12/30/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot Timothy Hicks..
Date: 12/13/2014 10:47:00 AM
very beautifully painted piece funom
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Date: 12/30/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Liam mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 3:09:00 PM
Funom, I remember this process well when I went through the engagement and marriage process with my wife. The is a quite wonderful write. Your imagery is spot on here. A Big "7" from too!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary Bateman
Date: 11/11/2014 5:08:00 AM
Beautiful!!!!
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:41:00 AM
Ohhh... You are so kind Herzel
Date: 11/5/2014 9:52:00 AM
Wonderful way to ask for a lady's hand in marriage..Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sara Kendrick

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