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Stand By Me - Emotional Write

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This is purely a fictional write for a contest - it is very emotional

01~14~15
Contest: Stand By Me
Sponsor: Kelly Deschler

Submitted to my favourite old poem contest - Shadow Hamilton
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First place in Stand By Me Contest Judged 01/24/15
Submitted To Laura Loo's First place only II contest

~awarded 1st place~

Oh my darling the news is so bleak I saw the consultant only last week Perhaps we better start making plans See the vicar; hear the wedding banns All I’ve ever wanted was to be your wife For better for worse, through trouble and strife The consultant confirmed I’ll not last the year Oh kiss me my darling; just hold me so near Wedding plans float around in my head My dying wish is that we should wed Time's running out so we mustn’t linger I need your wedding ring on my finger A simple service, just as quiet as can be All I ask my darling is that you stand by me 01~14~ 2015

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/30/2021 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win Jan. New year blessings xxoo

Lu Loo

Date: 9/4/2016 6:12:00 PM

Back with my congrats Jan :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2017 4:11:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo sorry I missed replying until now:-( hugs jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/20/2016 8:04:00 PM

A beautiful, bittersweet poem with endearing emotions expressed exquisitely. Congrats on your contest win, Special Congratulations on your Silver Anniversary celebration! blessings, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2016 1:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Lynn:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/19/2016 5:25:00 PM

Congrats Jan on your placement

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2016 5:36:00 PM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2016 10:59:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/19/2016 9:38:00 AM

Congrats on your placing with this wonderful write. Sunita

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thanks Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2016 7:30:00 PM

Hello, Jan, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2016 12:33:00 PM

Thanks as ever for a great contest and win:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2016 10:10:00 PM

I remember this beauty Jan. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ; ) 7

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 1:17:00 AM

Thanks Connie its quite a tear jerker and sadly i am hearing more and more stories of this nature:-( hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/19/2016 8:58:00 PM

Jan, back to congratulate you again for another win and your fine placement for this lovely poem in Laura's Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 1:17:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandra:-( hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 6/19/2016 5:56:00 PM

Jan, I remember when I first read this lovely lady, love it...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 1:18:00 AM

Thanks LuLoo it is a sad poem but special to me for many reasons:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2015 3:44:00 PM

Congrats, Jan. Maybe this one I've seen three times now?? (I have some poems I have used over and over again in contests, but it's because they accept old poems!!) You can't go wrong with an oldie but goodie like this one.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - I look at some of my poems and I can't believe I wrote them - but I did lol - this one is very sad but people do seem to like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/24/2015 3:05:00 PM

A wonderfully sad , winning sonnet my friend!! Congrats on your win!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2015 3:47:00 PM

Thanks Robert this is quite an emotional poem I am so pleased you liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/24/2015 9:16:00 AM

Heartfelt and well written. Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2015 10:22:00 AM

Thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:22:00 AM

JAN, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2015 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/23/2015 7:08:00 PM

aww...aww....aww....

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2015 7:12:00 PM

aww thanks Cas it is such an emotional poem - I look at some of my work and can't believe it flowed from my pen - do you do that too? hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/23/2015 5:45:00 PM

I do remember this poem, Jan. A sad but lovely Sonnet. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Sandra it makes me feel quite emotional reading this poem as sadly this scenario does happen:-( hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/23/2015 3:06:00 PM

Not totally fictional in which we can take our thoughts and feelings, and rearrange the personage...nicely written meaningful poem, congrats :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2015 5:30:00 PM

Oh I didn't know the contest had been judged thanks so much Ed :-) hugs jan xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/29/2015 1:51:00 AM

Goosebumps! You were able to capture the emotion in so sad situation, Jan. Congrats! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2015 6:50:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/27/2015 10:02:00 AM

Awesome poem!! Big congrats on your fine win my friend!A7

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Robert:-) It is a very emotional poem - sadly I see this scenario happening more and more:-( hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 12:53:00 AM

Ah Jan its so heartfelt, Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel !

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 1:53:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2015 11:26:00 PM

Jan, l'm glad that this heartfelt write made the winners list. Congratulations on your win. :-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 1:53:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 8:42:00 PM

JAN. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 1:52:00 AM

Thanks for another great contest Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Mohamed Adel

Date: 7/26/2015 6:31:00 PM

congrats on your win,Jan, a beautiful poem :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Mohamed:-) hugs Jan x

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/11/2015 7:03:00 PM

So great to be reading this beautiful poem once again, Jan. It's nice to know it has become a favorite for you! Congrats on another great win!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 12:16:00 AM

I wrote it for your contest Kelly - it is a special poem to me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2015 4:49:00 PM

Hello Jan and congratulations on the great placement..' ( best wishes )

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2015 4:50:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Joe I was so pleased to place well with this special poem:-) Hugs jan xx