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had no breakfast today
but somehow i'll make it
in the usual way
when it comes to hunger
i can take it
at work everything is wonderful
everything is fine
the weather is cool 
and bright is the sun shine
no worries what ever
my face has a smile
driving along my mind 
drifts for a while
and then it hits me
like a thunderbolt 
lighting on the inside
from somewhere in my stomach 
straight to my backside
you know that feeling 
you know what it is 
stomach churning
bubbling bad
something is yearning
and needs to go fast
before i know it
i'm full of hot air
i want to let it go 
but i do not dare
look for the box
they call johnny on the spot
but when i get there 
the door was locked
standing out side and holding it tight
no matter what their doing
i'm gonna lose this fight
and then it happens
what nature fought to get through
now tell me honestly
has this ever happened to you

Copyright © John Loving III

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:08:00 PM
    You guys don't mind to spill the beans and confess but a girl would have a hard time disclosing such awful secrets. My imagination is closed on this one Johnny lad! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Naw i can hold it in all day. Had to do that at work so now the bladder is so extended that it can hold a barrel. ha ha. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:23:00 PM
    don't let steffers read this, it'll put her off for life

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 9:38:00 PM
    hahahahahaha. (and what Kathryn said below)!!! which means yes. hahaha. (so was this one done too late for PD"s last contest?)

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 5/29/2012 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it was too late.
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 8:52:00 AM
    I'm not telling.

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 9:55:00 PM
    John, i wonder, if you are giving up.... hope you are well..xox..pd