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Spring Thaw

Drip...Drip...Drip Slowly---Too Slowly The melt begins hour by hour...day by day warmth knocking to come in peeling off the ice...piece by piece thawing...layer by layer exposing a fertile ground starting fresh...starting anew planting the seeds nurturing it with love growing stronger and stronger fresh spring feelings blossoming in full bloom creating a brand new world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/1/2015 3:19:00 AM
great flow to capture the feeling of the slow defrost. very cool write
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:21:00 AM
Now this is what I call "uplifting"! Good one, Tim!!!
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:57:00 AM
Anticipating the blossoming of Spring's dreams, dear Tim! What a great time! Hope our Spring would come to you soon as to incarnate your beautiful poem!
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:11:00 AM
- The sound of spring, Tim - Beautiful! - I wish you a lovely weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2015 7:56:00 AM
This puts me in a good mood, thanks Tim.
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Date: 2/27/2015 1:25:00 AM
What a beautiful message,if only..the world would blossom like flowers in Spring..If only it blossoms with new promises of peace that are kept.If only we could gaze in each others eyes without the ice..without religion's indifferences,just human to human,a rainbow will rise on our mother earth.Happy Spring days: ).Lovely!
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Date: 2/26/2015 11:03:00 PM
very nice, tim, Is it really cold where you are? I can't believe how nice the winter has been in Utah. But today was kind of like "old times!!"
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Date: 2/26/2015 7:57:00 PM
Oh I so love the spring the regeneration of life - thankfully we have no snow this year! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/26/2015 6:41:00 PM
Yes! Its coming. Slowly......it will get here before we know it:) and our spring hearts will spring with it!
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Date: 2/26/2015 6:08:00 PM
nice one, tim! i like how your poem mimics the slowness of the thaw...
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Date: 2/26/2015 5:58:00 PM
Dang, all of these Spring writes...and there's no melting going on around me....just more and more snow and freeeezing souls ! Nice write dear poet, enjoyed the tease ! Have a blessed day......much love, james
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