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Spring Haiku

fields of spring flowers watered by mountain snow melt- path wandering uphill cherry blossoms fall covering pathway in pink- spider web drifting

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Date: 5/16/2014 9:03:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Barbara

Date: 5/16/2014 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win with these little gems Barbara.

Date: 5/16/2014 4:47:00 PM

There's 2 fine haiku [simple as porridge] simply lovely. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/16/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Deb. I appreciate the feedback and the help. BG

Date: 5/16/2014 9:30:00 AM

Liked these, too. Thanks for commenting on mine.

Date: 5/16/2014 9:14:00 AM

Great unique and creative winning work..Way to go..Congrats on this wonderful work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Date: 5/16/2014 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win! Lori

Date: 5/16/2014 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations for your win. I loved the imagery in your poem. Best wishes Linda x

Date: 5/15/2014 9:11:00 PM

Love these, Barbara. I was so amazed to see this contest judged just now. congrats to you.

Date: 5/14/2014 5:37:00 AM

ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!! LAINIE

Date: 5/13/2014 9:48:00 AM

Nice images penned well, Barbara

Date: 5/13/2014 1:57:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku X 2, Barbara !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)