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Spring Fling

The decrepit Winter door drudges open drearily, And with it, delivers a deluge of drunken delight-- Soft succulent sapphire skies violate my visions, I stand suffused with muse and mystery in moiety; A masked man in vast lands of vivacious vehicles, Each infusing ineffable idyllic ideas into my mind; Black and blue sockets, eyes beaten by the barrage, Blinded by the balmy birth of a blistering breed; This season on Earth, first fauna felt after the melt, Helps herald the harbingers of heavenly halcyon; Spring-suede-sod serenely softens somnolent steps, Woken from within Winter's weary woebegone walls; Lunges of my lithe legs leave languid lassitude lost, A grimace graciously gone I gambol glorious groves; Ethos ebulliently erupting into opulent olfactory scents, Precious-painted-petals, the smell of perfumed petrichor; Vestigial vents of weather'y whiffs and feather'y sniffs, Revolvers of rhapsodic rays release heat upon my rust; Consummate creations cascading comely conflations, Slowly saunter splintered shadows of snowy sorrow; A demure dalliance decadently drizzled in dulcet desire, My forgotten fear of yesterday's forever falling flakes; An everlasting elixir of eloquently enchanting equinox, Fixes my frostbitten flaws and forges fresh life until Fall; March 17, 2016

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Date: 4/6/2016 11:10:00 PM
Sam J, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/11/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Linda-- I appreciate the warm regards :)
Date: 4/4/2016 2:50:00 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read. An excellent write Sam. The imagery sings. This piece is deserving of a seven rating....Mike
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 4:21:00 PM
Very kind feedback, Mike-- I appreciate the warm comments. I'm very happy you found some enjoyment in the read, always a bonus for me. Hope your day is going quite well my friend, take care :)
Date: 4/4/2016 8:56:00 AM
Sam I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 9:05:00 AM
You're comments are too kind, Hans-- there are so many talented writers out there..yourself included..but I would be delighted if any of my work helps open a gateway for others to create. Thank you for the great comment and inspiration to continue my friend. have a wonderful day, Hans :)
Date: 4/4/2016 3:03:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Sam..
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma-- I always appreciate your kind remarks. Have a wonderful day my friend :)
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thank you, Probir-- I appreciate the feedback and congrats. Have a great day!
Date: 4/3/2016 10:15:00 PM
Very rich in poetical elements... Congrats for the placement...
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Probir-- I appreciate the feedback and congrats. Have a great day!
Date: 4/3/2016 10:06:00 AM
Really nice Sam. Exceptional alliteration. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Peace my friend:)
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel-- I appreciate the feedback. Very happy the work made an impact...enjoy your day my friend :)
Date: 4/3/2016 8:07:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and I love the clever title Sam congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jan-- I appreciate the warm feedback, glad you enjoyed the read :)
Date: 4/3/2016 6:55:00 AM
congrats on placing Sam hugs
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow :) I appreciate the placement-- and thank you for sponsoring the prompt. Have a wonderful day my friend.

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