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Spring Cleaning Symphonies

Songs found together, Lost in the ether, Never again to be heard. Back in their cases, Tied up with laces, Memories captured , like birds. Turn radio off, A flame for a moth, Sad, genial melodies. They fissure my heart, And hold me apart, Snaring with sweet harmonies. Anthems of love, lost like a glove, Just one half still listening. These tunes heard alone, Don't have any soul, They no longer mean a thing. 31 Aug 2011

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Date: 9/7/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:26:00 PM
Beautifully written first place winning poem, Jodie!
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Date: 9/6/2011 5:53:00 PM
Contratulations on the first place win in the contest, Jodie
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:13:00 PM
good job in the contest. Tony
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 6:15:00 AM
lovvvve it, jodie.. congrats with my huggs!.:)
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Date: 9/6/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations Jodie. Those sad tunes will get you every time. regards Marg
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:58:00 PM
This is so amazing with it's subltle pauses and buttery flow. Just gorgeous. You sure earned the top spot! Congrats on this awesome win...Nette is the fairest judge of all and knows what a classy style you have, I;m sure! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place,Jodie. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on top spot for top notch poetry with this grand entry luv..super..
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:10:00 PM
So cool to see where the topic led the mind! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/5/2011 4:29:00 PM
Sweet melancholy write, Jodie.. fabulous! Congrats on a well-deserved first!
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. Great poem. Lee
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:15:00 PM
hey Jodie, congrats on a superb win, honoured to share top spot,, keep it in the family ha ha ha ..David
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:54:00 AM
The best to you in Nette's contest Jodie. I enjoyed your poem. Love, Carol
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