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Spring - a Tribute To Lynn

It's trying to Spring today In Dublin's Phoenix Park The trees are rising from the ashes of Winter Dressing in a tentative coat of green Like a thin leafy thong. Against a bright mixed sky Two butterflies, or possibly moths, -The suns' light making identification impossible- Play tag for supremacy of the skies Silhouetted in my squinting vision. A chubby chap with equally chubby dog Sits on a white bench walking his mate Spattered by sunlight leaking thru leaves Of the trees shading his seat While doggy rustles about happily. We converse a minute about far off places And sunburn and the Irish skin His standpoint underpinned by an anecdote Remembered from a long time past A slimmer time for man and beast perhaps. My wanderings continue in a long lazy lap Feeling the warmth on my nape Deer wandering close to the dangerous humans A childs' laughter carries to my ears Excitement at the proximity to Rudolphs' pals. Memories of happier times invade my thoughts The ninety minutes eaten up with ease Spring-like humour filtering down to drivers Who stop, smiling, and invite my crossing With a ballroom dancers exaggerated hand. Returning to the island of my car Feeling distant now from all I've encountered Warmed from both effort and experience I smile inwardly and selecting first Drift out into the Easter Sunday traffic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/19/2016 5:14:00 PM
What a lovely rhyme Brendan - I love Ireland especially Dublin which is such a vibrant city- probably won't visit again this year with the pound dropping against the euro:-(hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/6/2015 6:55:00 PM
A wonderful refreshing write, Brendan. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I enjoyed my visit here on your page. ~Caryl
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 7/7/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thank you Caryl, and thanks for visiting my page. I look forward to reading more of your work, and writing more of mine! :-)
Date: 5/10/2015 10:24:00 AM
Brendan :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/10/2015 10:34:00 AM
Cheers SKAT! I'm pretty shocked that it is featuring, but I can't say that I'm not happy! :-) Thanks for noticing! Love B.
Date: 5/10/2015 7:25:00 AM
Interesting work! Julia, with my best wishes.
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/10/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Julia! :-)
Date: 5/8/2015 2:03:00 PM
Brendan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/9/2015 4:27:00 AM
Linda, Thanks so much for the wonderfully warm welcome to Poetry soup! I am a complete novice at poetry but have always enjoyed playing with words. Promise to read some of your work when time permits! Take care friend! Brendan
Date: 5/8/2015 9:19:00 AM
great lines, wonderful expressions. What better way for this message to flow?
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/8/2015 9:57:00 AM
Hey Funom, thank you for your kind words. I'm new to this site (and to poetry) so it is really nice to get your feedback. I clicked on your profile and I can see that you have been very busy with the poetry!! I promise I will get to read some of your work soon! Take care friend! :-)
Date: 5/7/2015 2:17:00 PM
Amazing tribute, Brendan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/7/2015 2:26:00 PM
Hi Skat, Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I clicked on your profile picture and was a little intimidated by your long list of wonderful poems - promise to get enjoying them where possible!! I've always loved words but I'm a complete novice at poetry so hoping to continue and improve. Delighted to have you as a poetry soup "FRIEND" *hugs back* Brendan :-)

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