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Splay

Wild and unkempt, the field croons to me, a siren's call beseeching to play tag with the wind, sprinting across the uneven surface and splay full-length, face-down upon her mossy breast. I gluttonously drink gulps of her scent, fecund and rich and savory enough to satisfy my appetite. Then she whispers softly, mere breath-brushes against my neck, as the pull of an unheard heart-thump draws me down to nestle deeper in her caress. The curly blades of grass trill arias as they sing across my skin, and tiny red ants march to their drumbeat of life in rank order rows tangent to my face, while a solitary spider dangles from a single silken strand. . I lie hidden from the world by my sentient shield immersed in the rhythm and innate magic of my overgrown meadow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/9/2009 6:45:00 PM
congratulations on being featured!
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Date: 1/9/2009 12:56:00 PM
Wow, this is truly amazing! Congrads on being featured....:) Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 1/5/2009 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations Jennifer on the featuring of "Splay." Vince
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Date: 1/5/2009 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:24:00 PM
Great job, Jennifer! Congratulations on making it to the final round! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2009 9:58:00 AM
Jennifer - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/4/2008 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 8:56:00 PM
Jennifer - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your entry advancing, Jennifer! This is a fantastic work of poetry! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 11/19/2008 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 7:47:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 7:24:00 PM
Jennifer - You're Poems' Imagery/Word selection/Syntax never swerve from their exactitude, continuing in an ever-poly- rhythmic "splay." This Piece, a certain exercise in the Poetics of Sound & Enjoyment! We're all holding the Vision for the WIN! H'H.
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