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Spinning Out of Control In the Desert

Saved from the fire's lips by the sound from their own, like a lonely jellyfish, alone and never to sting. All water, no form, pointless. I'll take care of the past and keep looking for that future.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jennifer
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jennifer. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:03:00 PM
Congrats Jennifer on your featured poem this week on P.S. great piece to share with us all with luv..
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