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I adore you, curled and satisfied, your beauty full displayed, the swell, the fullness of your breasts make thoughts of sadness fade. Your lips so red and aggravated, trembling with desire, your form exhausted from the fire, my manhood enervated. Spent, the zenith of our passion sealed and stricken with a kiss, we lie content, the aftermath, the pinnacle of bliss. 'Tis heav'n, the summit of our love, enshrined in dreams so rare, a promise made to order with a locket of your hair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/8/2015 9:24:00 AM
Vivid imagery and splendid phrasing, with the details left to the imagination. Well done. Dave
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:10:00 AM
A Beautiful and unique way in sharing what lies beneath your passionate heart. Luv. Skat
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/2/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thanks SKAT! Not too specific? I hope not. Luv Keith
Date: 12/1/2015 9:17:00 PM
Wow....awesome....haven't been on soup in quite a while...sure have missed wonderful friends like you Keith...this is lovely
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/2/2015 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Donna! K.
Date: 12/1/2015 4:15:00 PM
very sensual Keith:-) hugs Jan xx
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/1/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I never use explicit scenes or language in my erotica, in fact, I very rarely write erotica. This is the first piece in quite some time.
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