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Squiggly lines in the sky become fish that quickly swim away. Peonies bloom with bursts big and bright, making a splendid display. Eye-popping patterns of pyrotechnics thrill the young and old. Colors that crackle make cherry flowers that beautifully unfold. Trails of sparks can glitter the sky in gold or silvery ways. Aerial treats are these while anthems play; the heavens are ablaze! Chrysanthemums, palms, and waterfalls too are capturing our gaze. Universal in appeal, how traditional fireworks are - Lights that lift like rockets though they never go too far! Amazing plethora of pops - the patriot’s delight. Revelry accompanies the grandest show of the night! Written Jan. 17, 2016 For the SPECTACULAR acrostic contest of John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/30/2016 1:40:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Andrea. I entered mine but somehow it never showed up. I wrote him but he already closed the contest. I really must remember to double check to make sure the entry shows up.
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Date: 1/24/2016 4:38:00 PM
I enjoyed this, Andrea; my first thought was to write one with a fireworks theme. Glad you did it. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/23/2016 7:49:00 PM
You've lit up the sky, Andrea! Congrats on your well deserved placement!
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:54:00 AM
Congrats dear Andrea on your placement. Wonderfully knit Acrostic....
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:40:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write Andrea..
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Date: 1/22/2016 12:38:00 AM
fsssssss......BANG! WOOOO! A firecracker of a write, Andrea, well done! Viv x
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Date: 1/21/2016 6:20:00 PM
excellent acrostic Andrea, congratulations on the win...
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:58:00 PM
This one crackles and pops such wonderful colors. I'm aghast. You be splendid. Love, daver
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:18:00 PM
nicely written, Andrea.
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Date: 1/21/2016 12:46:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/21/2016 9:59:00 AM
Really Spectacular. Congrats Andrea to win. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:01:00 PM
Wow, you opened with such a spectacular line! Very descriptive, I applaud your firework word display!
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Date: 1/19/2016 1:32:00 PM
Excellent, Andrea. I love fireworks but not the loud noise some of them make. I've been reading some of your work. Keep writing. Best to you. / M
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Date: 1/18/2016 6:35:00 PM
Andrea, this is excellent, it truly is ... CayCay
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Date: 1/18/2016 3:37:00 PM
I like this Andrea. Nice visuals and wonderful descriptiveness.
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:09:00 PM
very descriptive; i was with you in that parade of lights, andie... so grand!..huggs
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Date: 1/18/2016 3:30:00 AM
A beautiful picture that unites with a beautiful poem Andrea! Spectacular! I am sure to see this on top my friend. #7
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Date: 1/18/2016 1:08:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:01:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... once gain, well written painting with words. On NYE we had the pleasure of an illegal fireworks display in front of our house. By gosh they were loud - Lindsay
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Date: 1/17/2016 7:51:00 PM
Wonderful, beautifully arrayed words to give a descriptive poem of fireworks. Great work to match the photo.
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