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Space Explorers

Lifting off from Earth with a blast The first manned mission to Mars at last Moving past red dwarfs real fast With neutron stars going past Celestial fireworks of a supernova in full view As through the Milky Way at warp speed we flew Mars would become our space base The dawn of a new race to space Earth would remain the galactic jewel A hub for supplies and to refuel The journey to Mars took almost a (Earth) year Zooming by pulsars and asteroids to get there With many more worlds to explore Going where no man had gone before On a quest to find alien life forms and unravel a mystery that has lasted for eons Perhaps we'll find them right there on Mars Or somewhere among the myriad of stars It was just like on Star Trek Traveling through this awesome universe But captain Kirk was not on deck And Scottie couldn't beam us up yet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/8/2012 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2012 2:10:00 AM
very nice poem friend Joseph :) Congrats on your win..cheers!
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:28:00 PM
Love the twist in the ending verse....A nice poetic space adventure. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2012 7:17:00 PM
thank you Debra
Date: 10/5/2012 4:26:00 PM
SUPER CONGRATS JOSEPJ ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN AND MANY CONGRATS ON ALL RECENT WINS TOO LUV ..
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2012 7:17:00 PM
thanks Linda
Date: 10/5/2012 4:24:00 PM
JOSEPH, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2012 7:16:00 PM
thank you PD
Date: 10/5/2012 3:48:00 PM
thanks for the support' nate
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2012 4:16:00 PM
thank you for my placement in your contest Nate
Date: 9/18/2012 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for taking us into space with this fine write.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2012 7:16:00 PM
thanks Robert
Date: 9/14/2012 10:48:00 PM
one fantastic journey Joseph as u sail through space with wonderful choice of vocabulary luv .. a trip to the winners circle for this amazing effort ..
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2012 7:15:00 PM
thanks Linda
Date: 9/14/2012 7:50:00 PM
Did you catch Captain Kirk as the father in that new tv series? I forgot its name but it used an expletive that they blocked out in the tv show title!! (I think that show is not getting renewed but I kind of liked it)
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Joseph May
Date: 9/15/2012 12:47:00 PM
No i didn't see that...... I'll have to check it out...
Date: 9/14/2012 12:05:00 PM
liked the comparison witrh str trek! well writtn!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/14/2012 12:34:00 PM
thank you Apoorva... I apreciate your comments
Date: 9/13/2012 9:48:00 PM
An interesting write, and I liked the cute references to star trek and captain Kirk. Have you seen the captain lately? I think Scottie needs to beam him back to the 60's!!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/14/2012 5:43:00 AM
thank you for your comments Andrea...always appreciated...Last time I saw the captain he was heading to the ocean....in a TV commercial!!

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