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Sounds of Violence

Hello carpet my old friend She knocked me down on you again Because in the house I was softly creeping I woke her up while she was sleeping And the splinters that were planted in my brain Still remain Within the sounds of violence In restless dreams she was alone My drinking she would not condone ‘Neath the stairway she knocked me flat Busted my head with a baseball bat When my eyes went dark and my hearing became dull She split my skull And touched the sounds of violence And with my bleeding head I saw What was meant by shock and awe And I wondered what she was thinking She was screaming about my drinking People writing poems that no one ever shared I was so damn scared Of her Sounds of violence Fools said I you do not know When I fell I broke my toe Hear my words that I might get first aid In the bar is where I should have stayed But my beer, like silent raindrops fell And echoed in the walls of violence That is when I bowed and prayed That I could go back to second grade And then she flashed out her warning I felt a concussion forming And she told me that the words of the warning will be written on the kitchen walls Not in the halls And whispered in the sounds of violence. Parody of Simon and Garfunkels Sounds of Silence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/4/2010 6:31:00 AM
Wow ! Vince this is excellent.The reader could feel the wind of violence in your words. Very expressive indeed with great imagery. Excellent. Thank you for your kind comments.
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:21:00 AM
this is awesome not funny do do real life violence, good luck in the contest, if it is not over just yet,..p.d.
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Date: 4/25/2010 4:14:00 PM
Great writing ... a sure winner in the contest!!
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Date: 4/22/2010 9:16:00 AM
An excellent write Vince. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/18/2010 3:20:00 PM
Vince, Wow, Congratulations on your win. Your poem was clever and inventive and really enjoyable to read. So glad I didn't miss reading it. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:16:00 PM
Crazy man lol Congrats on your win Vince
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:58:00 PM
Hey, I knew this would do well! congratultions, Vince! Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:32:00 PM
Hysterically funny! Excellent job on telling this tale and keeping the correct number of syllable to keep the ryhym in check. Enjoyed this splendidly humorous story!
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations Vince on your second place win. Very worthy poem, Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:25:00 PM
Congrats Vince on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest ... great lyrics and great write for a fantastic win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/16/2010 3:54:00 PM
As always....you keep us smiling laughing, and having fun!! Congratulations, Vince...great job! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/16/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on placing second in my contest, Vince. You did a great job and had me laughing out loud as I tried to sing along. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2010 8:34:00 AM
Quickly popped in and was highly entertained by this poem. So very well done, made me smile and remember the original song fondly, was one of my all time favorites. Love Heidie.
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:17:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, Vince. the parodies are my favorites whenever we are doing song lyrics here! Thanks also for your funny remarks in my blog. Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/14/2010 5:30:00 PM
Ha! Ha!.....I hope that you learned your lesson and will be on good behavior from now on or leave...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/13/2010 6:19:00 PM
Dear Vince, Thanks for your kind words about my poem. I enjoyed your Sounds of Violence, a great parody! I want to come back and read more of your poetry because I like rhyming verses, and you do it so well. Love, Amy
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Date: 4/8/2010 10:15:00 AM
An excellent write Vince. Good Luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/8/2010 4:22:00 AM
Wish you all the best in the contest. I enjoyed
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading you this early morning here in Malta,Vince..great great write..Charma
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:58:00 PM
I enjoyed reading you this early morning here in Malta,Vince..great great write..Charma
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:38:00 PM
Excellent for the contest and good luck with this terrific piece ...great song u chose.. mine was Kodachrome entitled poem of Rocky Romance... so enjoyed your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/7/2010 7:42:00 PM
Oh well, Vince...I WAS gonna' do one on that song but why bother now?...Hilarious stuff!! I can tell you know that song well!... By the way, 'The Graduate' is one of my all-time favorite movies...(And here's to you... Mrs Robinson!) - Tim
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Date: 4/7/2010 7:23:00 PM
Holy crap! This is awesome!
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Date: 4/7/2010 5:35:00 PM
I agree....this will be HOT very soon!!! What a great piece...you nailed it, Vince!!
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