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Sounds of a Day - For Contest

Hungry cry of waking baby challenging the staccato of small arms fire. School bus honking over the droning hum of I-phone ear-buds. Wood fire banked against searing desert winds rattling glassless windows. Pop tart in microwaves, nutritional nuance of the overfed undernourished. Dogs barking in the distance, squeaking well wheels bare feet padding to distant comfort. Beeping, one eyed tyrants, demanding attention “whatuwearin’”, Rooster’s inane need to alert everyone “SUN’S UP! – SUN’S UP!” Children squabbling over much – or little. Pots and pans and decisions, “who likes what” vs “who needs it more”. Mother’s spreading love on fragile hearts, singing songs long forgotten by the fathers. Prayers said in the hope of golden morrows tears shed in the depth of poverty’s sorrows. The cry of a waking baby, the hungry sound of an empty tin, choking angry words: “Please sir, could you help, again”. Sounds of a day blowing across a hardened consciousness aching to be heard. 6/18/2016 submitted to – Sounds of the Day – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 6/21/2016 10:20:00 AM
Wonderful! Thank you, John!
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Date: 6/21/2016 5:30:00 AM
These are deep sounds "aching to be heard":) Great write:) Congratulations on your win, John:)
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Date: 6/20/2016 3:33:00 PM
wowowow. OUTSTANDING work, John. I love how you covered not just the sounds but the feelings behind them. BIG congrats on one of the best in the contest.
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations John on the placement of the contest John
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Date: 6/20/2016 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, I love the way you go on and on.
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:52:00 PM
Everyday sounds we sometimes overlook but make up our beautiful day. Nicely written and congrats on your fine win, John. Sandra
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Date: 6/18/2016 11:06:00 AM
So many sounds with so many connotations!Great write. All the best for the contest. ~karam~
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